Review ~ Vacant by Evelyn R. Baldwin
4 Stars
I think my biggest complaint was this book was not longer. And that’s not a bad thing, it’s actually a good thing. I was invested in Ethan in just the first few pages. I was even more involved with Emily as I went through it with Ethan. I love how they evolved and grew and just loved! And it wasn’t a simple, quick start for them either.
The author did a great job creating characters that grabbed me right away and in so few words. I truly wanted more. This could have been a novel. I would have enjoyed getting more of their daily lives and struggles, BUT I think Evelyn did a wonderful job picking scenes that were needed to keep it a short story.
I found, with my not so grammatically correct eyes, just a few errors, but nothing that really distracted me. Well, one did just a little … In a scene with fighting neighbors the word Punta was used and it should have been Puta. But otherwise nothing serious.
I can’t wait until the author writes something else. I want more! 🙂 Great job!
Please see her blog tour post for more info about the book and the author.
I read the story too and couldn’t agree more!! Wished it was longer and looking forward to more. Though, I would not classify the story as erotic, I was a bit surprised after reading it that it was classified that way. It should be more of New Adult classification in my opinion.
Thank you!
I agree on the erotic thing,. I guess there are two versions, but I didn’t think this was erotic. Adult Contemporary or New Adult for sure. 🙂 It was a really cute story though.
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